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- MSW Personal Statement of Purpose Sample, Diversity
MSW Personal Statement of Purpose Examples, Professional Writing and Editing Service I hope to attend the MSW Program at ____ for a variety of reasons including the location, where I would have the full support of family and my developing networks of colleagues and like-minded people also interested in the challenges that we face in Social Work here in California - where I was born and raised. This local support base will enable me to give my all 24/7 to the fullest immersion experience possible in Social Work as a graduate student. I am also extremely attracted to the creative and rigorous character of your program. I hope to be selected as a mixed-race applicant, half African American and half Mexican American, and someone who faced numerous challenges growing up as a child of a single mother living in poverty. I look forward to a long lifetime of helping many of America’s neediest children and families, with a focus on the enormous struggle faced by minorities in urban settings. I could not be more fully convinced that this is what will bring me the greatest joy and professional sense of fulfillment, serving as a helping hand to those left behind or at risk, those most in need of my help, those that have ‘fallen through the cracks’. I have especially enjoyed learning Spanish in school since much of my own heritage is Latina and the fact that people who speak mostly Spanish make up an enormous and steadily increasing share of those in need of social work services, especially in large urban areas here in California. I actively seek out opportunities to practice my Spanish and it is improving rapidly, but I do not yet consider myself fluent. MSW Personal Statement of Purpose Editing Service Examples, Professional Service I long to contribute to society and feel very strongly that the greatest contribution that I could make would be to help the members of our society that are most vulnerable, at risk. I wish to provide healing and serve as a source of hope, for one client at a time. I am especially engaged with the subject of human trafficking and particularly highly motivated to help victims of this most insidious of evils that remains entrenched worldwide, including the US. I look forward to a lifetime of engagement with this issue, serving as an advocate for victims of human trafficking and the progressive enhancement of our legal systems to address this issue in the future. I hope to earn my MSW Degree in preparation to become a social worker for LA County’s Department of Family and Social Services. In this capacity, I plan to become a LCSW and to make constant progress in the department, giving my all, and advancing to the level of a Human Trafficking Social Work Manager. My foremost inspiration for seeking a career in Social Work Counseling is my own positive experience with a social worker. In 2008, sitting on a maroon, tear-stained couch, across from a lady I had only known for a few minutes, I found myself pouring out my life story and my very soul at the tender age of only fourteen. I was suffering from depression and anxiety and didn't know how to cope with all that life was throwing at me. My counselor helped me to turn my life around and to overcome the depression and anxiety just when I needed this help the most, in my most formative and at-risk period in life. This was such a watershed experience for me that it became determinative in my choice of career. I want to make a similar kind of contribution to others on a professional level. Now, at 24, I can look back thankfully and most fondly to my counselor who set me on course at 14. She is the one who planted the seed and helped me to blossom, subsequently inspiring me to want to save others as well at critical points in their lives before they hit rock bottom. This lady empowered me to achieve a much more positive outlook on life, my family, and my future. If I hadn’t gone to therapy to learn the tools to combat what was happening in my head daily, I may not have been inspired to become a social worker and decide to dedicate my life to wanting to help the vulnerable and disadvantaged. I appreciated the fact that a stranger cared enough to want to help me, be my advocate, and give me a full chance in life. MSW Personal Statement of Purpose Samples, Help, Professional Service When I am not studying and giving my all to my professional position, I intend to give most of my time to my volunteer efforts. I already have significant amounts of experience as a volunteer, and I look forward to continuing for a lifetime. As a volunteer with the Safe Routes to School Program National Partnership, for example, I assisted students by providing appropriate modeling, emotional support, a positive attitude, and general guidance; communicating student behavior, needs and progress with teachers and staff. I have delivered food to the elderly and disabled with Meals on Wheels Long Beach and recycled and organized trash pickups for Keep America Beautiful: Great American Clean Up. Setting up various booths for March of Dimes Walks, I register runners and walkers alike. At El Caldito Soup Kitchen, I have helped to serve the hungry of the greater Las Cruces area with food, dessert, and providing hygiene necessities. For Race Against Cancer, I organized and handed out shirts, prepared goodie bags, assisted runners with finding their bib numbers, and greeted participants with smiles, answering questions and providing race information. Finally, at the New Mexico Mission of Mercy, I registered volunteers as well as participants who needed dental care. I grew up in poverty and it shaped my life; I know how grueling, demanding, and unforgiving it can be. The other side of this, however, is that I also have vast experience in how poor people can be very resilient even relentless, never losing hope. I watched my mother struggle for many years to provide a better life for my sisters and I. Being a witness to her struggles helped me to understand the multifaceted aspects of human behavior during times of hunger, want, and when one if forced to struggle merely to survive. Thus, I see my childhood and adolescence as having given me much more than they have taken from me. I learned the importance of giving when you can and accepting help when you need it most. In my current position as an Intermediate Clerk for the Los Angeles County Department of Public Social Services, I work with people from diverse levels of society. I remember what it was like sitting in the welfare office all day waiting and desperately needing help. To now come full circle and be the one providing the help is most fulfilling. I have experience working with children of different ages and my professional focus is centered on the wellbeing of young people. For a long time, I thought about becoming a teacher but soon began to crave a more personal, targeted impact on young people with special social and emotional needs, those who are at-risk; thus, social work. My desire to become a social worker is grounded in my teaching experience, however, as a tutor at Hillside Elementary and Mountain View School Districts, both set in poverty-stricken communities. Here, with these disadvantaged children, I was able to make a significant improvement in their daily lives and make an enduring impression that would continue to inspire them. I would like to tutor children and families alike so that with the right choices, they have the power to live genuinely happy and fulfilling lives and make important contributions to their communities. I am a good fit with the MSW Program at XXXX because of your declared mission to “address social problems.” By completing your program my problem-solving skills will grow enormously, and I will become increasingly adept at working with people because of developing broader and more sophisticated perspectives on life, always practicing, cultivating empathy and compassion, and learning how to be a good listener. Earning the MSW will be challenging, and I will always need to remember to maintain my own self-care as a priority for that is the foundation of all. Although challenges are sure to arise, every challenge comes with the chance to overcome and strengthen your personal growth. It is through challenging times that I believe that we can truly become who it is we were meant to be. A full immersion experience in Social Work theories, methodologies, and issues will help me to locate myself at my most productive center and focus on making my maximum lifetime contribution to Social Work. As an undergraduate student I was on the soccer team and this helped me early on to refine my time management skills, studying, working, and playing soccer all at the same time. My family is also incredibly supportive of my dedication to earning a graduate degree and now is a particularly suitable time for me to return to school. I especially adore what I have done so far in preparation for my career as a social worker, serving as a mentor to children, all little Latinos, helping me to discover and savor what is for me an increasingly powerful and prominent aspect of my own racial identity. I have found nothing that excites me as much as teaching children from low socio-economic backgrounds to learn how to read, write, and develop basic math - as well as social - skills. At Hillside Elementary in Las Cruces, I fell in love with teaching, mentoring, and helping at-risk children to be safe and to go on to live richer and fuller lives - on an everyday basis. The populations that I currently work with are disadvantaged teenage adolescents and adults from 18 to 80 years of age. I am proud of the fact that my current professional position entails assisting applicants and participants receiving public assistance, completing documents for Cal Fresh, Cal Works and/or Medi-Cal, etc. I see the difference that this support makes up close in the eyes of the children, driving my passion to do more in the future as an MSW professional. One example of an ethical conflict that I have faced is when I was working as substitute instructional aide with the Head Start Program. Parents often helped in the classrooms, and I noticed one parent stealing craft supplies (from her own child’s classroom). This presented a dilemma since she was a volunteer and saw this as just compensation. After further reflection, however, I realized that what she was simply taking was needed by the children in the classroom; thus, I reported her to the teacher. These days, in my free time, I increasingly find myself reading about NGOs that primarily work to prevent human trafficking, advocate against it, and bring awareness to this international epidemic. I plan to continue to cultivate this special interest as a graduate student. I want to engage with this area, helping victims to recover and get their lives back on track to the extent to which this is possible, helping them to set the stage for a lifetime of healing. Thank you for considering my application to Social Work at XXXX. MSW Personal Statement of Purpose Sample
- PHD Social Work Personal Statement of Purpose Example, Chinese
PHD Social Work Personal Statement of Purpose Example, Writing Service I ask for acceptance to ____ University’s PHD Program in Social Work because I want to help people in my native country, China, the vulnerable, those who have been discriminated against. This is my professional purpose, and it is very much grounded in the historical circumstances of me and my family. For this reason, I describe those origins in detail in what follows. My father and mother were born in a small village in northern China, and both dropped out of junior high school to work on the farm. When President Deng established the first Special Economic Zone in Shenzhen, Canton province, in1980, they moved to the city in search of work. Life was hard in Shenzhen and made still more difficult by the fact that they had to obtain a temporary residence permit so that they could stay in Shenzhen legally. First, they had to write and send several applications stating why they wanted to go to Shenzhen and then go through a background check before they could get on the train and began their journey on a shoestring. Once they arrived, they lived in a hut with others from their own and nearby provinces, many of whom were impossible to understand for my Mandarin-speaking parents since they spoke Cantonese. Since the Cantonese speakers were dominant, the only work available to my parents was hard labor. Backed up by local laws, recent arrivals from other parts of the country were discriminated against and exploited by those who considered themselves to be the original residents of Shenzhen. My father was referred to as “Bei Lao” (whore’s husband), and my mother as “Bei Gu” (whore). PHD Social Work Personal Statement of Purpose Example, Editing Help My parents worked extremely hard, but life did not improve. Once my mother was pregnant with me, her second child, things got worse. Because of the one child policy, once the government noticed that my mother was pregnant, she would be forced to have an abortion, and the family would have to pay a US$8000 dollar fine. My mother had to quit her job and hide in a small village in Canton, which was a ten-hour drive from Shenzhen. Thus, my parents had to separate. My two-year old sister lived with my father in Shenzhen, Canton province. My mother gave birth to me in that small village, and we lived there for eight years. We were the only two nonresidents there. Though the small village was in Canton, unlike the residents in Shenzhen, they were much nicer to the nonresidents. During the time I lived there, all I knew was that our neighbors and us spoke different languages, but I did not sense any discrimination based on ethnicity. When I was eight, my parents decided to place a priority on my education, so my mother and I went back to Shenzhen. This was the first time many unfamiliar things and people surrounded me. Most of our neighbors spoke Cantonese. Since our family could not speak Cantonese well, the neighbors seldom communicated with us. They also did not let their children play with me. Most of our family’s friends were other people who were nonresidents in Shenzhen, Canton Province. We went to church which was preached in Mandarin every Sunday. The Christians there were the people who came from other provinces. I was unable to attend the public elementary school, however, because I was a second born child and not an original resident. (In China, public schools are much better than private schools.) There were several private schools open to--exclusively--nonresidents and/or non-first-born children. In response to this blatant discrimination, non-residents in Shenzhen got together and established an association, which they called the “Tongxiang (translation) Association”. However, these types of associations did not last long since the Chinese government discouraged the establishment of these organizations because it feared that they would result in social reforms and with no support at all from the government these associations failed over time. Our ethnic-based church group developed much faster, however, with the churches in Shenzhen offering sermons in both Cantonese and Mandarin. Most of the time, our family went to Mandarin sermons because the Christians there were from other provinces. I made most of my friends there, which meant only a few of my friends were original residents. Church-based ethnic groups functioned as mutual aid societies with members using their personal resources to help each other. My parents always wrote out “atheism” in any application form or paper for anything when they were asked about religion. My parents explained that they did not want to cause any trouble. In Chinese school, the concepts of racism and discrimination are not even mentioned but I learned a lot from my life experiences and from my parents. Some kids in our neighborhood and my classmates in middle school called me “Bei Lao” and laughed at my accent when I spoke Cantonese. Moreover, since many people were not Christians and the government promoted atheism, my classmates would laugh at me for being Christian as well. I felt scared when I faced the original residents. When I did something wrong in front of them, they yelled at me, and said “go back to your village, Bei Lao!” I also felt confused. I did not understand. Why did they always make fun of my accent? Mandarin was the official language in China, and we were all born in China; therefore, we are supposed to have human rights and dignity, or so I came to believe in my own mind and heart by the time that I was an adolescent. I finally got my Cantonese ID when I was sixteen. I ask for admission to study towards the PHD in Social Work at ____ University because I want to prepare for myself fully for a lifelong struggle to help families like my own in China that suffer from discrimination. I want the residents in Canton to see other people as equal to themselves. I wish that, as Chinese citizens, people like us should not have to apply for special, temporary residence permit to live legally in another city. I wish nonresidents could receive the same welfare benefits as residents when they are paid the same tax. I wish when the nonresidents get a severe disease, such as cancer, the medical insurance would cover some of their expenses. I wish if the nonresidents want to apply for a driver license, they do not have to pay higher application fees than residents, and I wish that the nonresidents’ children could go to the public elementary school, like the children of residents. PHD Social Work Personal Statement of Purpose Editing Service The shame that I experienced as a child is now buried deep inside me. Nowadays, the original residents of Canton are more accepting of nonresidents now; still, I still do not tell most people where my parents came from. Since I lived in Canton for more than twenty years, my accent faded away. I am more comfortable speaking Cantonese when I am in Canton than I was before. But deep in my heart, I still worry that people will call me “Bei Lao”. I choose to build a career in Social Work, rather than Law, because there simply is no such thing as a civil rights movement in China since such a thing would be illegal and immediately repressed. My principal professional values are rooted in Confucianism which places an exceedingly high priority on kindness, diligence, and obedience. These values affect all aspects of my life. I am especially proud of the values of kindness and diligence, and I am always willing to help other people. It is the value of kindness, in particular, which resulted in my choice of Social Work as my major and career. The value of diligence teaches me “no pain, no gain”. People will be rewarded for their efforts, and this also explains why my parents, as nonresidents, could overcome difficulties and achieve success during tough situations. I take issue, however, with my own religious tradition with respect to the concept of obedience. The value of obedience resulted in my obeying the orders of teachers as well as my parents even when those commands were morally unacceptable. Furthermore, I have become increasingly convinced that the high priority placed on obedience in Chinese society is harmful to Chinese people, especially those who are discriminated against for ethnic or linguistic reasons. Too much emphasis on obedience is bad for the economy since it stifles innovation. Teaching people to obey authority without questioning authority is simply bad for social development. The discrimination policies that made my childhood a nightmare are violations of the Chinese constitution, but people seldom protest these policies; they just obey them. My cultural values have helped me to become a sensitive and empathetic person. I work with Asian immigrants to America, and I understand the pain in their lives. This makes me highly motivated to improve my abilities in advocating for social change and social justice as a social work professional in China armed with a PHD Degree in Social Work from XXXX University. My extensive knowledge of economics and finance will help me conduct social welfare research from an interdisciplinary perspective that considers liberal principles of economic freedom, supply and demand, and the logic of Adam Smith's invisible hand for example. I worked as a volunteer with children with developmental disorders, such as Down’s Syndrome when I was an undergraduate. As a student in my MSW program at XXXX University, I focused on geriatric social work and completed my field placement in this area. Since my graduation, I have continued to choose to work with older adults. My first semester of study in the US was difficult. I experienced culture shock. It was a big adjustment for me: Searching for housing, first time taking a class in English and authoring papers in English in APA format was incredibly challenging. My first semester’s GPA was only 2.59. In the semesters that followed, however, my GPA rose from 3.49 to 3.60 and then 3.75. I am most enthusiastic about research and teaching. To cope with the increasingly exponentially larger data sets available on the internet, I self-mastered scripting language Python to use the data more powerfully and effectively. For example, I have learned how to write basic programs to extract big data sets for government websites and to search for patterns in text and web data. With equal passion, I also enjoy sharing my knowledge and experience. For me, it is a privilege to stand on the stage and share what I know with co-workers, peers, and next generation social workers. I have recently been providing trainings for new social workers in China, and it is also my long-term career goal to become a professor of Social Work in China. During my first year of my master’s program, my field placement was in Friends of the Children ____, which is a therapeutic program to assist with clients’ academic and behavioral challenges. I provided individual and group therapy and safety training with Hispanic and African American teens. During my second-year field placement, I worked as an intern at XXXX Senior Services, ____. I performed assessments and developed individual plans for over one hundred older adults. I co-led a Vietnamese men’s group with a psychologist and a men-women’s group with an LCSW, I also provided psychoeducation for four Clozaril groups at ____ hospital. After completion of my Master of Social Work, to have more practical knowledge, I accepted an offer to work with a Case Manager in a community housing agency. I worked with older adults who have mental illness. I provided psychotherapy, benefit application, and resource linking for my clients. I also participated in several continuing education training programs regarding entitlements and benefits. I now understand much better how the system works at a practical level. My awareness of the imperfections of American welfare systems has also increased. After this position, I moved back to China to continue to work as a social worker in a community setting. Besides providing clinical services for clients and training new social workers, I have had the opportunity to practice social work on a Macro level, conducting community mapping projects and assessments along with drafting funding proposals and service guidelines for the agency. I applied for a position in the Social Work Department at Beijing Normal University in Zhuhai, and I will start working there next month at the beginning of November. My main responsibility will be conducting research and completing government grant applications. I thank you for considering my application to your distinguished PHD Program in Social Work at ____ University. PHD Social Work Personal Statement of Purpose Example
- MPA Personal Purpose Statement Examples, Mexican American, Border Issues
MPA Personal Purpose Statement Examples While born in the USA, I was raised in Weslaco, Texas, close to Mexico, the land of origin for my family. I find myself increasingly drawn to the border and border issues, the moral and political dimensions, and the suffering that surrounds or results from the politics of the border. The plight of children caught up in these border issues motivates me to work hard to become a public servant to protect them and help them to achieve a normal, healthy, and happy life, reunited with their loved ones. The MPA program at The University of Texas in the Rio Grande Valley is the only program to which I am applying for a variety of reasons, especially because these border issues are of particular concern to us. Just getting started on my career, the most relevant experience I have so far is the time I spent with the Southwest XXXX Program as a Seasonal Youth Care Worker. The facility where I worked in Harlingen, Texas - from September through November of 2014 - houses unaccompanied minors from Central America. I conducted intake interviews for new arrivals, provided them with food and clothes, and showed them to their assigned bedroom. I oversaw laundry and cleaning chores every day of the week. MPA Personal Purpose Statement Examples, Writing and Editing Service, Help My co-workers and I were entirely responsible for the youth’s safety and health, and I took this responsibility very seriously. We supervised them 24/7, day and night, while they were awake or asleep. We listened to these young people and were responsible for reporting any problematic activity or comments to our supervisor. As the days and weeks passed in this position, many children grew on me, and I developed intense, genuine affection for many of them. They shared their stories with me of their journey to the United States. We learned from each other; they saw me as their host and themselves as my guest, a tremendous responsibility to which I hope to begin to live up by earning the MPA Degree with a focus on their healthy being. At first, this position was stressful and depressing. My first reaction was to feel sad and outraged at the reality of many refugee children who want nothing but to ‘work.’ 9, 10, and 11 years old, and all they talk about is when they will get their temporary visa to start” working” and send money home. Many talked about how hard it was to live in Central America because of the gang violence and saw coming to the US as the only way to escape a violent death at the hands of the gangs that rule the streets. One child watched his parents die of a drug overdose in front of his eyes, so he moved in with his grandmother, who sent him north. While in our facility, he was informed that she had passed away. His only hope for a family was to reunite with an undocumented uncle in the USA. MPA Personal Purpose Statement Examples, Writing and Editing for Success This is where I want to be, listening to the stories of child victims of life circumstances and failed policies, human greed and political domination, the tales of those that fall through the cracks and live at the fringes of human rights recognition. I want to learn their stories so that I can help them, becoming a credit to my profession and my society by constantly searching for and struggling to implement pragmatic solutions to complex problems, always reflecting a human face and never losing sight of the great vulnerability of the many thousands of children that walk across our border every year. Thank you for considering my application. MPA Personal Purpose Statement Examples
- MPA Personal Statement Samples, Mexican American, North Carolina
MPA Personal Statement Examples, Professional Writing and Editing Service I am a Mexican American man, 27, born and raised mostly in California; I am now a permanent resident of North Carolina. I relocated here initially to attend the XXXX School of Law. As a result of a death in the family back home in California, however, I only completed one year of law school, in 2013. Since then, I have recognized with increasingly clarity that I aspire to a leadership position with respect to North Carolina’s Latino community; this is why I want to switch tracks and earn the MPA at North Carolina’s flagship university in a program designed specifically for those who want to be leaders in their communities. I earned my undergraduate degree in History because I have long had a passion for understanding social change and progress, particularly from a Mexican or Mexican American perspective. As a Mexican student of history, for example, I learned that “the border crossed us” not the other way around, at least in the beginning, something which has continued to color my perspective on Mexican identity ever since. Throughout my undergraduate studies in history, I had my heart set on law school because I was under the impression that lawyers were movers and shakers; and many are, and many do make important contributions to social change. Nevertheless, as I have matured over the course of the last few years, I have come to better understand the limitations and pitfalls of a career in law and, while I do not rule out finishing a law degree in the future, I now have my heart set on the MPA because I want to be first and foremost a bilingual leader of the Raza and to participate as fully as I can in the debates going on in the public square about immigration, human rights, culture wars, economic development, and the protection of the most vulnerable, particularly from a Mexican/Mexican-American perspective. I am currently interning for a non-profit organization, the ____, that supports troubled children, providing legal, social, and psychological services. Many of our clients are Spanish-speaking immigrants and I oversee interpreting for them and translating their documents. The most important thing that I am learning here is how to go about building and making a success of a non-profit organization. I am getting to the big picture; and I find myself very much inspired to begin planning now for building my own non-profit in the future, based on the wisdom that I will acquire because of completing the University of North Carolina’s MPA Program. MPA Personal Statement Samples, Writing and Editing Help, Service XXXX is my first choice for graduate school for a variety of reasons, not the least of which is the fact that I live close by. In addition to being the flagship MPA program in my state, I see no other program that attracts me as much as yours simply because of your thoroughgoing emphasis on the importance of leadership—and being a leader is central to my professional, personal, and spiritual mission. I am very dedicated to my community, our Latino community here in North Carolina. The single most noteworthy feature of the Hispanic or Spanish-speaking immigrant community here in North Carolina, most of them undocumented, is that this population is growing rapidly. I enjoy studying the way in which stringent legislation and attitudes along with scare tactics in the public sphere have sent many fleeing from Arizona, Alabama, and Georgia, and have come to see our state as something of a haven. This is also why I see the ____ MPA program as the optimal springboard to prepare me for a lifetime of service protecting and assisting Spanish-speaking children and their families who are at risk or in crisis. I am a hard worker and a quick learner who has a significant amount of experience in a variety of areas that will be critical to my professional performance in the future, molding me into leadership positions. In addition to my current position protecting at-risk children, I have also worked extensively with the school district in my community, especially translating benchmark tests designed to prepare children for the California Standardized Test. I have worked with a migrant program in partnership with the Caesar Chavez Foundation providing extra, critical support to children who have missed school because of the migrant status of their parents. Caesar Chavez is my foremost hero. MPA Personal Statement Examples, Professional Service I also started an athletic program in our school district, managing third-fifth grade boys' and girls' basketball and soccer teams for five elementary schools. The fact that I am a former semi-pro soccer player provides me with enormous influence in the Latino community and I try to take advantage of this gift to inspire young people, especially the little boys. I have also worked with Autistic children, providing services that would enhance their communication skills to enable them to achieve greater levels of independence and productivity. I worked specifically with low-income Spanish speaking families. I have set down roots of my own in North Carolina and bonded with Latino communities and numerous social and professional networks that I see as perhaps my greatest asset. I want to devote my life to helping low- income Spanish-speaking families fight drugs, gangs, and violence through the implementation of greater access to and completion of higher education, greater appreciation for bilingual education early on, and most of all, jobs. I also plan to spend the balance of my life wrestling with questions of Mexican and Mexican American identity, and I hope to publish in this area at some point with reference to my own sojourn in sense of civic self. I have sometimes thought that I should simply identify myself as American, other times Chicano, less frequently Mexican. I have come to realize and appreciate that it all depends on the ‘audience’, with whom I interact and for what reason, as I become different things to different people. For me, the idea of identifying myself as a "Chicano" is no different than citizens of Texas identifying themselves as "Texans" during the Mexican American War. I am mesmerized by what I see as a great confusion surrounding many issues of race and ethnicity, especially from a Mexican or Mexican American perspective. But I hope to be an even better doer in the future than a thinker; and I see my own choices as very personal, a direct result of my passionate sense of identification with the Latino community. My community provides me with a cause for which to fight in search of a sense of nobility in struggle. In my case, I proudly represent all Spanish-speaking families from challenged communities. I am proud to do so as a Mexican American who is himself a product of a low-income Spanish-speaking, immigrant home with an exceedingly difficult childhood. This is why I want to be the voice of those who suffer today as I did long ago, in those critical years when only a few of us got off to a good start and many if not most of the rest fell behind. Even though I was born in CA, I assimilate rapidly with immigrant families. I can bond with them because I understand them and relate to them, the difficulty of the challenges that they face and the courage to struggle forward to care for one’s children and their long-term needs. I want to be a voice for the ‘undocumented’, especially in North Carolina, their ambassador, their champion. We need to think more in terms of social programs on both sides of the Rio Grande River and less about building fences and staffing armed patrols along the border with Mexico. First, fences and guns do not work; the children come anyway, many in search of their dad or their mom who is already here. I am part of what I believe is most Americans who favor some kind of immigration reform that would respect the basic human rights of families, parenthood, and the right of a child to dignified treatment. I admire my President Obama, but I am saddened by our failure with immigration reform. This issue is close to my bone, and I hope to stay on the forefront of the struggle as long as necessary. I thank you for considering my application to your program. MPA Personal Statement Samples
- MPH Personal Statement Public Health, Spanish, Latina
MPH Personal Statement Public Health, Spanish, Latina I once met a senior hospital administrator who did everything possible to avoid seeing or meeting patients or distressed relatives because such an encounter had once upset her. It occurred to me then that it is truly dangerous for those administering matters relating to the sick and their care to see them solely as ‘budgetary units’ or only as part of theoretical paper plans because such people could never acquire and retain the professional enthusiasm and passion needed to fulfil their role properly. I made up my mind then to ensure that I would regularly expose myself to the ‘real world’ of health provision to remind myself that ‘budgetary units’ are in fact brothers and sisters who may be in great distress and whose lives I may have the power to affect for the better even if only marginally. All the volunteer work that I have undertaken has involved visiting the sick, particularly children, and helping at homeless shelters. Such exposure to the sick and marginalized ensures that I never forget that the statistics are real people and that their problems are important, and I am determined to continue to do so. Since childhood it has been my intention to ‘make a difference’ rather than merely ‘make a living’. Public Health is a field in which I feel confident that I can make that difference in people’s lives. I now seek to acquire the expert skills and knowledge to enable me to assist in identifying and implementing programs to provide accurately targeted and effective health education and improvements in healthcare to achieve a general and increasing improvement in health awareness and in well-being. I am especially interested in the identification and treatment of those who may ‘fall through the net’ because of financial considerations or lack of health awareness. My career objective is to gain employment in the CDC either implementing programs or conducting program evaluations, on health disparities and would be extremely interested in assisting in research on the extent, effects, and remedy for health provision disparities. MPH Personal Statement Public Health, Spanish, Latina, Writing Service Sample I am confident that the program will equip me to achieve my career objective. I have carefully researched and considered several excellent programs available and conclude that your own is the ‘best fit’ for my purposes because of its flexibility and interdisciplinary nature, the wide variety of elective courses and their relevance to my career aspirations, the practical elements of the program, the prestigious reputations of the faculty and the success of graduates of the program. I am aware that the increasing incidence of, for instance, preventable diabetes and STD’s and the significant effects of the ‘aging population’ are bringing new challenges that will require new and imaginative initiatives and I want, very much, to be one of those dealing effectively with these and other current and future challenges. I am confident that the program will equip me to do so. MPH Personal Statement Public Health, Spanish, Latina, Editing Examples I believe that this work to date has provided me with a good grounding in areas that are highly relevant to the program and my career beyond it. I have been involved in public health related research work for two years. I have been involved in a wide variety of work including the provision of project management and research support, conducting focus groups, authoring technical reports, providing presentations and the development of health training materials. I have had the advantage of being interested, encouraging and highly knowledgeable supervisors and mentors who have given me the opportunity to apply my initiative to my work and provided me with a wide variety of tasks and duties. I have a solid academic record with a GPA of XXX and having made the Dean’s list for two semesters during my undergraduate studies. I have research experience, and I am keen to apply this experience within the program to an interesting and useful project. I am first generation Hispanic; I speak and write Spanish fluently. I have happily studied, worked, and socialized with people from many social and ethnic backgrounds. I have travelled widely, having visited South America, Asia and Africa and was fascinated by cultural differences and contrasts that I met on these travels. I am a sociable person with a well-developed sense of humor who gets on easily with others. I hold a directly relevant bachelor's degree, have a solid academic background and research experience. I also have highly relevant work experience. This background will, I am sure, enable me to ‘add value’ to the program and bring valuable insights to it. My most important ‘asset’ is my enthusiasm and commitment which will be fully applied in the program for my own benefit, that of my colleague students and of the faculty. Thank you for considering my application. MPH Personal Statement Public Health, Spanish, Latina
- MS Program in Communication Sciences and Disorders, Slavic Diversity, Multilingual, Multicultural
I hope to be accepted to the MS Program in Communication Sciences and Disorders at XXXX University based on my multilingual abilities and multicultural experiences. In addition to being a native speaker of Russian, I am especially proud of the intensity of my devotion to American Sign Language, and I am most pleased to be rapidly approaching an intermediate stage. ASL is at the top of my priority list. Personal Purpose Statement Communication Sciences and Disorders My appreciation for and contribution to diversity is also grounded in the fact that my mother is Polish and Ukrainian, and my father is Russian and Mongolian. Born and raised in Tiraspol, Moldova, we moved to the U.S. when I was 9-and-a-half. I identify very heavily with the Slavic community here in the city that we have made our home, Sacramento, California, among many tens of thousands of other immigrants from Russia, Ukraine, Moldova, Belorussia, Bulgaria, etc. This is primarily this community that I seek to serve as an SLP professional since I can excel at tailoring therapy to respond to cultural influences. The Slavic community in the USA underuses social and mental health services for a variety of reasons mostly related to bias, both against mental illness – which is seen as some kind of weakness at best or deformity at worst – and the American health care system more generally speaking. Many American Slavs are racist, and this has a devastating impact on their mental health and development of community spirit. As a member of the Slavic community myself, my heart aches to see so many members of my community suffer from mental health issues in silence if not secrecy. Something similar can be said about issues in speech, ‘impediments’ which are often stigmatized in the same way as mental health issues, with the sufferer feeling ashamed as if it were somehow their fault. I want to contribute to making a difference in this area, particularly with special needs children in the Slavic community. I want to promote acceptance, understanding, compassion, and solidarity with children that have special needs. One of my goals as a volunteer, for example, is starting a Sunday School program for children with special needs in my church, and training current Sunday School teachers in effective behavior management in the classroom. I would also like to start a support group for those who have children with special needs within the Slavic community. Personal Purpose Statement MS Program in Communication Sciences and Disorders Eventually, based on successful completion of your master's program at ____ State, I would like to continue my studies at the doctoral level. I also look forward to gaining extensive experience working in several different areas of my field: special needs, swallowing, voice therapy, traumatic brain injury and stroke patients. Finally, my central long-term goal would be to someday open my own clinic that would incorporate the use of therapy dogs to enrich therapy sessions. I love dogs and I love Speech pathology; so, the combination for me stands at the center of my own aspirations with respect to both research and practice. I am most proud of the fact that I went on a two-week missionary trip to Mexico to help build houses for the homeless, because it symbolizes my ethic of service. Most of all, for me, this ethic and extremely elevated level of motivation to serve are channeled to my intense desire to help people with communication impairments, especially children. I want to make a difference in my local community. I am good at what I do and when I worked as a Speech-Language Pathology Assistant all my supervisors encouraged me to pursue this career and expressed their confidence that I would make a great SLP. I want to center my life around research and practice in multilingual speech therapy and I also seek a lifetime engagement with Animal Assisted Therapy. Personal Purpose Statement MS Program in Communication Sciences and Disorders The oldest in my family, I have three younger brothers that I practically raised because my parents needed to work multiple jobs to support our family. I have multiple job experiences where I worked with bilingual children and one of the schools I worked at as a Speech Pathology Assistant was a Title 1 school, which means that most of the students came from low-income families. I took a class that focused on autism spectrum disorder (ASD) and I have experience providing speech therapy to children with multiple intellectual disabilities including ASD. I also worked in an Autism Preschool as well as providing services to special needs students in middle and high school. I have an uncle who has communication difficulties following a stroke. Thus, I appreciate first-hand the devastating effects of such a scenario on the entire family, including the financial aspects. I understand the nature of the stress that the family is under. I also volunteer at Yolo Adult Health Day Center working with individuals that have Dementia, Traumatic Brain Injury, or difficulties resulting from a stroke. Working at this center has reminded me of how important it is to look at the whole individual and their full range of emotions: laughs, tears, smiles, and often heartache. My mother-in-law is a survivor of breast and nasopharyngeal cancers as well as two ischemic strokes. I know what it is like to be a family member of someone in the hospital and this will help me in my role as a clinician. Thank you for considering my application to XXXX University. MS Program in Communication Sciences and Disorders
- Health Administration Fellowship Personal Statement
Health Administration Fellowship Personal Statement Examples, Professional Editing Nigerian graduates are required to undertake a year of National Youth Service. Because of volunteer experience in hospital administration, I had an opportunity to join the administration team in a non-profit home and clinic for physically challenged children. However, shortly after taking up the role, it was decided to close the home because of funding shortages and serious organizational failures. I made a case for keeping it open, I pleaded for a chance to ‘turn things around’ and the local government officials reluctantly agreed. I organized a successful fund-raising campaign, persuaded pharmaceutical and medical equipment companies to donate, persuaded some physicians to volunteer their services and improved staff training and co-operation. This success resulted in my receiving a state award for exceptional community service. Health Administration Fellowship Personal Statement Samples, Writing Service From both personal and working experience, I am acutely aware of the contrasts in the way hospitals in Nigeria and those in the US operate. Administration in Nigeria is sometimes chaotic and corrupt and this impacts on patient welfare. I spent time in hospitals as a child and I also lost a sibling because of avoidable confusion in a Nigerian hospital. Having given birth in US hospitals, I have observed stark contrasts in the organization of health services. I want to identify and import ‘best practice’ into my country’s pediatric health services and see the fellowship as an excellent way to enable me to do so. I am undertaking master's degree studies in Health Care Administration and expect to graduate in spring of this year. I have a cumulative GPA score of 4.0 which will provide assurance as to my academic ability and potential, and my passionate interest in the subject. I see the role of health administration primarily as providing a platform to enable healthcare providers of all grades to perform their roles at optimum effectiveness. I see the removal of any administrative obstacles as being a basic matter and one that should be subject to constant monitoring and appropriate action. Health Administration Fellowship Personal Statement Examples, Service I would seek to minimize the administrative demands on clinicians while simultaneously enabling them to have easy access to necessary supplies and equipment and relevant, accurate, reliable, and up to date patient, statistical and other relevant information. I am especially interested in rotations that are relevant to the administrative and clinical interface such as; Clinical & Administrative Operations (which will enable me to effectively manage the medical department’s staff and services to increase efficiency with patient treatment, clinical protocols, and regulatory requirements for safety), Decision Support Services Supply Chain Management (to help me address tactical, strategic and operational problems), Patient quality and safety ( to help me to promote patient safety and measure health care quality delivered), Education Administration (to help me develop the skills needed to be an effective administrator), and Compliance (to teach me how to monitor adherence to regulations and statutes governing healthcare systems). I know that my goals are ambitious and that leadership skills are going to be vital to their achievement. I have always studied the character and techniques used by good leaders and teachers in my work and studies and seek to emulate them. My direct experience of health administration in the US is limited but much of my work has called for the kind of inter-personal and organizational skills that are directly transferable. I do have volunteer experience in health administration locally which has provided valuable insights into US health administration. I am about to begin an unpaid healthcare internship at Providence Little Company of Mary Medical Center this spring in the US to gain on-the-job training and exposure to health care management activities and assist the organization to accomplish special projects and tasks. I understand that fellows are exposed to a wide variety of current and challenging administrative issues and are tested in both interests and skills in several departmental rotations and projects. I am result driven and goal oriented. My personal and professional experiences have prepared me to face and overcome obstacles and challenges and I look forward to demonstrating my commitment, determination, diligence, and passion. Health Administration Fellowship Personal Statement
- MSPH Public Health Masters Personal Purpose Statement
MSPH Public Health Masters Personal Purpose Statement Examples, Editing Service I am a strong candidate for your program because of the mixture of public administration and health care in my academic and professional preparation. Growing up on the border between Turkey and Georgia helped form me to become a cosmopolitan and multilingual woman—Turkish, Georgian, Russian (beginner), and English. Working and studying as a health care professional here in America has provided me with vast opportunities to observe health care organizations here as well. he internships that I completed with several different health facilities in Turkey were central to my professional development; especially visiting villages to provide vaccinations and health care information. While I was unable to complete my master's in international relations in Turkey because of my immigration to the U.S., I learned a great deal about comparative political and administrative systems. I was never one who struggled through my youth without knowing what I wanted to do with my life. For me, working in Health Care has been my aspiration since adolescence and I am most thankful for this dedication to human service that has been instilled in me since my youth. The logical step for me as a young woman in Turkey was to become a nurse; thus, I attended a vocational high school that trained me in nursing, helping to lay the foundation for my later becoming a R.N. here in America. Studying towards my B.A. in Public Administration in Turkey helped to prepare me to become a critical thinker who is fascinated with and profoundly engaged in the political questions that are most relevant to the social organization of my world and the critical issues and opportunities that result from these configurations. MSPH Public Health Masters Personal Purpose Statement Examples, Professional Service In nursing school, I regularly visited villages along with public health experts to educate families and vaccinate their children. And we had to struggle to overcome enormous challenges, such as parents who resisted the vaccination of their children because they thought that this would render them infertile. The lack of adequate public education about vaccinations made it difficult to stop contagious diseases. These experiences helped to inspire my dedication to the goal of spending the balance of my professional existence working in clinical epidemiology. In both Turkey and later in the US, studying and working as a medical assistant, it was laboratory work which I found most exciting. I feel born to scientific exploration. Working as a medical assistant, I had the privilege of dealing with many immigrant patients with low incomes who often waited until it was too late before seeing a health care professional. Thus, I have become extremely sensitive to the economic, cultural, and educational issues that are involved in American health care—especially concerning those who are most vulnerable. My central interests lie in the areas of perinatal epidemiology with research interests in reproductive health, adverse perinatal outcomes, infectious diseases, and HIV/STD prevention among vulnerable populations. I now realize that my heart has moved in these directions because of my aunt dying during childbirth because of pre-eclampsia and my mother almost losing her life bringing me into the world for the same reason. Thus, I am profoundly engaged with the struggle against genetically-based disease, and I want to make a career out of studying prenatal and postnatal disease and infant mortality—as a woman. I see prenatal and postnatal mortality rates as the most essential signs of the development of a nation or people. I want to give my life to research in reproductive health, adverse perinatal outcomes, infectious diseases, and HIV/STD prevention among vulnerable populations. MSPH Public Health Masters Personal Purpose Statement Samples, Writing Service I was able to receive my Medical Assistant Diploma with honors from XXXX Institute in Norcross because of hard work, profound dedication to my studies, and the early preparation that I received in this area Completing vocational high school studies in Turkey in 1997, at only sixteen, I graduated second in my class. Graduating from the Black Sea Technical University in Turkey with a B.A. in Public Administration and then going on to study international relations at Gazi University in Turkey’s capital—I was forced to interrupt my studies to immigrate to the USA. I now look forward to returning to full time graduate study in your program and I am most excited about my candidacy. MSPH Public Health Masters Personal Purpose Statement
- Med Peds Residency Personal Statement, Canada, CARMS
Med Peds Residency Personal Statement Examples, Writing and Editing As a Saudi Arabian pediatrician and teaching assistant, I am driven by a desire to constantly advance my knowledge of the medical profession and hone my skills in the fields of both pediatrics and internal medicine. After a great deal of thought and consideration, I am confident that pursuing a Med Peds residency would be the ideal path for me and would allow me to make the finest contribution possible to our field. As a passionate individual with an extensive background in Pediatrics and Internal Medicine, I have a very keen interest in the Med Peds Residency Program. Having dedicated my career to studying the complexities of internal issues faced by children, I am confident that the Med Peds Residency Program is the perfect place for me to expand my knowledge and continue growing as a medical professional. My enthusiasm for treating our smallest patients has equipped me with the patience and compassion needed to care for children of all ages. Med Peds Residency Personal Statement Examples, Writing and Editing Service My end goal is to acquire knowledge, skills, and experience that I can use to progress in my chosen field. I believe in constantly learning and staying up to date with the latest developments and issues that are relevant to pediatricians in the KSA. I am excited to embark on this journey and hope to make a positive impact in the lives of patients I encounter during my residency. This past January 2012, I took the Medical Council of Canada Evaluating Examination and achieved a total score 314. I will take USMLE steps 1 and 2 within the next few months. I hope to continue to participate in research and I seek inspiration that will help me to continue to publish in my field. I also look forward to participation in community events that highlight the progress and advancement being made in pediatric care. I finished medical school in July of 2010, and then completed an internship in July of 2011. This internship included rotations in surgery, emergency medicine, radiology, pediatric gastroenterology, pediatrics, internal medicine, and ob/gyn. I trace my dream of becoming a pediatrician to the age of 9, where I declared this to be my goal in my diary; at the time, I was being treated for a febrile illness; my own doctors became my most important role models for what I wanted to be when I grew up. Med Peds Residency Personal Statement I believe that the principal cornerstones of success between the doctor and the patient are honesty, mutual respect, and trust, and making the patient sufficiently comfortable to facilitate the arrival of an accurate diagnosis and treatment plan. As a Med Peds resident in Canada, I assure you that I will strive with all my might to rapidly become an asset to your program, employing the latest knowledge and techniques in detection and prevention of disease, to develop and employ methods of evidence-based medicine and to show reverence for human beings by providing excellent care to all my patients, continuously broadening my knowledge through experience, continuing education courses, and participation in research and professional organizations. I have a special interest in the struggle against diabetes, especially because this disease is advancing with great rapidity throughout the Middle East. My country, for example, has the 3rd highest incidence of this disease in the world. My article, “The Prevalence of Hyperinsulinism & Type 2 Diabetes among Overweight Children & Adolescents at ____ University Hospital” has recently been accepted for publication. Thank you for considering my application. Med Peds Residency Personal Statement
- Master’s Public Relations & Corporate Communication
Master’s Public Relations & Corporate Communication Personal Statement People are becoming increasingly sophisticated, and what passed as a strong PR strategy even a decade ago may be no longer effective in an age of internet networking and a general distrust of corporate ‘spin.’ It is also fascinating to see that, for all the training and knowledge accumulated by PR professionals, ill-considered remarks by a senior executive or a CEO of large companies continue to be a regular feature of corporate news with often disastrous but avoidable outcomes. PR ‘disasters’ had particularly fascinated me even before I began my bachelor's degree studies in International Business Communication. I believe that careful analysis of them has the potential to teach much to PR professionals and senior executives of all specialties. Master’s Public Relations & Corporate Communication Statement of Purpose Help This is an exciting time in PR and Corporate Communications, requiring the adjustment of current techniques and thinking to new situations and researching, designing, and applying methods of getting a message over. I very much want to be involved in this process. I can think of no better way to acquire the education I seek than by joining this program. I am drawn by the teaching methods involved as they do actual corporate projects. I am aware of the prestigious reputation of the faculty members and the quality of the program amongst professionals, as evidenced by the awards given in recognition of its effectiveness. My goal is to acquire the highest available level of skills and knowledge in my chosen field and apply them to the benefit of an international non-profit organization. The relevance of my bachelor's degree studies and my experience in sales, PR/events, and customer relationship management will enable me to share valuable insights in class discussions. I am a friendly person who gets on well with others. I realize that a likable ‘messenger’ adds much to the positive perception of the message itself and believe that I have the characteristics to do so. I enjoy working as a team member towards a common and valuable goal and look forward to working in project teams. I have spent six months in the US, studying in Georgia and traveling. I am also widely traveled otherwise, having visited Greece, Germany, and Turkey. I also spent several months ‘backpacking’ in India and Thailand and was exposed to diverse cultures, social structures, and the contrasts between rich and poor; this experience fired an interest in working for a charitable organization once I had completed the program. I am interested in acquiring knowledge of new cultures and sharing my understanding. Master’s Public Relations & Corporate Communication Personal Statement for Graduate School I look forward to the opportunities that I will find in the multicultural environment of New York. I know that this highly prestigious program will attract many well-qualified applicants. However, I am an exceptional candidate. I have a bachelor's degree in a closely related discipline; I have practical volunteer experience in PR projects and relevant professional experience serving as the public face of an organization. My main recommendation is a passion for becoming an honest and highly effective communicator, assisting organizations in identifying and resolving internal and external communication problems and providing them with a cheerful and supportive voice. Master’s Public Relations & Corporate Communication
- MPH Personal Purpose Statement Samples, Haiti
MPH Personal Purpose Statement Samples, Writing and Editing Service Having been born and raised in a tiny rural village in the backwoods of Haiti, I am aware of hardship, which has made me a dedicated and compassionate professional. At 39, I want very much to finally complete my dream of graduate school so that I can help my people, first those who have made it to New York and later those who remain on our tragic island. The recent earthquake, now aggravated by flooding, has played a leading role in my desire to earn a graduate degree to be able to help. One of fourteen children born to my parents, two of them died in childhood due to unhygienic health conditions. My parents were dirt-poor tenant farmers. While my father finished the eighth grade; my mother was illiterate and could barely scrawl her name. I grew up in grinding, barefoot poverty in a commonplace shack with a tin roof. The broiling tropical sun made it swelter inside. The torrential rains poured through our leaky roofs and the streets outside became a sea of mud in the rainy season. Since we frequently did not have enough to eat, I learned firsthand what it is to experience the wrenching pangs of hunger. These challenging circumstances helped to forge my character and make me a stronger person, as well as one who can genuinely empathize with the suffering of others. MPH Personal Purpose Statement Examples When I was fifteen, my father obtained a green card, and we immigrated to the United States and moved into the tenement slums of “little Haiti” in upper Manhattan. I entered high school not knowing a word of English. The school was infested with gangs and vastly different from the homey environment of my village in Haiti. Through much struggle and effort, I was able to master English, although I did not graduate from high school until I was twenty. After finishing high school, I enrolled in and completed a home health aide training program. I took the fall semester of 1990 off and worked full time to save for college tuition. I first enrolled in ____ College and then transferred to ____ Community College where I earned an AAS in dental hygiene. After that, I entered XXXX University, obtaining a BS in biology. I have known all along that I wanted to become a health care professional, and, thus, chose to study primarily in healthcare and physical science, to prepare me for graduate study. After completing my studies, I began to feel a keen desire to return to Haiti to help raise people out of the vicious cycle of extreme poverty, hunger, and unhealthy environments and lifestyles. But I had to postpone my dream because of family and financial responsibilities. Now, however, I have achieved the level of maturity, tenacity, security, and liberty that I am finally able to pursue advanced studies in public health. Ever since obtaining my BS in biology, I have worked as a dental hygienist. All these years, I have never forgotten my dream of returning to my native country to help my long-suffering people. MPH Personal Purpose Statement Examples Professional Writing and Editing Since I married several years ago, my husband, also from Haiti, has encouraged me to pursue my ambition of obtaining an advanced degree in public health. And his support has helped to inspire me with the confidence to fulfill my professional dreams. Although I live in NYC, the recent catastrophic events in Haiti, have shaken me to the very core. Now, more than ever, I feel an urgency to acquire the training needed to help those in dire need. If selected to enter your program, upon graduation, I will work to raise the health and living standards of Haitian immigrants living in the United States. As the doors open, I would also like to return to the country of my roots to help rebuild the health infrastructure and make a difference for the better in people’s lives. MPH Personal Purpose Statement Samples
- MSW Personal Statement Samples, Purpose Essay Editing
MSW Personal Statement of Purpose Examples, Editing Service I am a 27-year-old woman of Mexican heritage, raised in the troubled environment of South-Central Los Angeles. This difficult environment left me highly motivated to take advantage of all the opportunities open to me personally and to try to help others to do the same. I sought to succeed and serve as a role model for those struggling, the vulnerable, the at-risk. I have labored to persuade those that I seek to help that ‘all things are possible’ is not just a high-sounding phrase but a truth that can change their own lives if they embrace it. Social Work offers me the best opportunity to fulfill my goal of helping others, benefiting society in a direct and practical way. I am totally committed to and passionate about Social Work, which is for me a calling as well as a vocation. Mature, self-motivated, compassionate, empathetic, and independently minded, I am often praised for my excellent communication skills. I am a native speaker of English and Spanish and have undertaken a significant amount of voluntary work in my life involving, for example, helping seniors and teenagers with ‘special needs’ in undertaking various leisure activities. I have also escorted veterans who are confined to wheelchairs, as a volunteer. I derive a great deal of satisfaction and pleasure from helping others in this way and believe that I provide a service of substantial benefit to those I assist. During my time at ____ University, I was a member of Alpha Kappa Delta, an Honors Society for students of Sociology and graduated with a GPA of 3.45. The Society’s declared purpose is ‘To investigate humanity for the purpose of service’, which I wholeheartedly share. Our society is particularly active in community service, and I enjoyed fully sharing in most of our activities. I have also been employed as a Primary Intervention Program Aide, which involved assisting students through third grade having trouble adjusting to school. The primary objective in this work was to bond positively with the children on an individual basis to improve their perception of themselves and thereby create the ability to succeed in school. I was able to assist many children to achieve this goal, enabling them to get ‘on track’ to a successful academic performance. I enjoyed my work with children, to which I related exceptionally well according to the program director. I served with the Californian Army National Guard from 2000 to 2009 and was on active service in Europe from October 2004 to February 2006, attaining the rank of sergeant. During my service I undertook a wide variety of duties requiring effective planning, meeting strict deadlines, the necessity to function effectively as a member of a team and to demonstrate effective leadership and decisiveness in my capacity as a non-commissioned officer. Military life provided me with training and discipline which has enhanced my ability to relate well to people of all backgrounds, to focus, to strive unswervingly towards my goals and not to accept ‘second best’. I believe that these attributes will be of great advantage to me in pursuing the rigorous demands of the MSW program. Successful MSW Personal Statement Samples, Writing and Editing Service In addition to an exposure to other cultures during my upbringing in Los Angeles, I have seen active National Guard service in Germany, Kosovo, Albania, and Montenegro. I also travelled to Italy, Spain, Bulgaria, Greece, Honduras, and Mexico during periods of Rest and Recreation. These experiences have left me with a curiosity about, and an interest in, cultural variety and an understanding of the effects of culture on individuals and the need to take cultural background into account in relating effectively with others. It was during my active service with the National Guard that I developed a profound and special interest in the welfare of those serving and of fellow veterans, and their families and consequently military social work is the field in which I am keen to specialize. In addition to relevant work and volunteer activity, my bachelor's degree at California State University at Fullerton provides an excellent basis for the master's program with my classes: Theories of Social Behavior, Developmental Psychology, Sociology of Education, Sociology of Families, Sociology of Social Interaction and Sociology of Communications. I qualified for the Dean’s list in 2008 and 2009. I am a caring person, and my goal is to contribute to the well-being of others, to help people to function more effectively, to assist in bringing about beneficial social change, and ‘make a difference’ in those communities where I shall work. It has been necessary in my life for me to be able to relate well to people of all kinds of backgrounds, from the ‘marginalized’ to highly qualified professionals. ____ University's MSW Program places a heavy emphasis on field education, which makes it particularly appealing to me, by far the ‘best fit’ for my purposes. I am aware that Social Work is one of the few disciplines where it is possible to excel in theory and to thoroughly fail in its practical application. The constant testing and proving of theories and of oneself in real situations is vital in this field and I am certain that I can excel in both theory and practice and can provide useful input into Social Work research. MSW Personal Statement Examples I hope to be able to undertake at least part of my field work amongst service personnel and/or veterans, and their families and I would like to participate in research in the areas of military social work and veteran services. My goal is to become a commissioned Behavioral Sciences Officer in the Californian Army National Guard and the MSW program is of crucial importance to my realizing this ambition. I am aware of the prestigious reputation and high standing of the ____ School of Social Work and of the master's program. I know therefore that there will be very many well-qualified applicants. However, in addition to my passion for my subject, my proven personal qualities, academic qualifications and highly relevant work and volunteer activity, I have also gained many important life-skills gained through my service in the National Guard. This will enable me to make a unique contribution to my class and the academic community at ____ University. Thank you for considering my application. MSW Personal Statement Samples